Looking for song critiques

As some of you know one of my other hobbies is playing guitar and recording music. I started playing guitar at 8 years old, played my first gig in 1969, and the last with our band SWITCH, in 1989. Now I mainly write my own and record in my home studio. Our old lead singer, Darren Ehrlich, wrote and sung this song. What do you think?



https://soundcloud.com/darren-ehrlich/hometown-usa-album-cut-remix?fbclid=IwAR00mh20us0LnfxvUnNmerJ7s5QK2dwc0FbNiK9NQTlFbShX1mf51oiZS0k